You embedded a broken video :o
"http://www.youtube.com/?feature=player_embedded";
edit: fixed
OKAY HELP TIME
The colors for Gullywash in the intro are really bright (welcome to Gullywash and video editing). A bit darker and it will be perfect. Practice your smooths and they'll turn out a lot smoother. Yours during the intro were good but they could be better. The first sniper clip goes too quickly. I think you may have done it cause the song is more upbeat? Not sure, but that's more of a personal opinion. At 0:26 it's kind of choppy, try recording at a higher FPS if you can.
I think your colors overall are a bit too bright now to think about it. Looking at that medic to medic crossbow airshot, you can barely see the kill notice let alone what it reads and even the kill itself. Might wanna tone that down.
The smooth/third person view of the red soldier before 0:47 is unnecessary, looks like you forgot to remove it or forgot to do something with it. The linear swipe @ 0:52 swipes to black and then the next clip shows. It's better to have the next clip slide into the video rather than how you put it. The clip at 1:30 ends too abruptly, let it drag out a little. The last smooth of the triple airshot, I like what you did it with, having the scout fly into the camera so to speak, but you missed out on what the purpose of the smooth was for: the airshots. Aim it a bit higher and you're golden.
I really like the song and I enjoyed the video. Just touch up on some things and you'll be good to go.
"http://www.youtube.com/?feature=player_embedded"
edit: fixed
OKAY HELP TIME
The colors for Gullywash in the intro are really bright (welcome to Gullywash and video editing). A bit darker and it will be perfect. Practice your smooths and they'll turn out a lot smoother. Yours during the intro were good but they could be better. The first sniper clip goes too quickly. I think you may have done it cause the song is more upbeat? Not sure, but that's more of a personal opinion. At 0:26 it's kind of choppy, try recording at a higher FPS if you can.
I think your colors overall are a bit too bright now to think about it. Looking at that medic to medic crossbow airshot, you can barely see the kill notice let alone what it reads and even the kill itself. Might wanna tone that down.
The smooth/third person view of the red soldier before 0:47 is unnecessary, looks like you forgot to remove it or forgot to do something with it. The linear swipe @ 0:52 swipes to black and then the next clip shows. It's better to have the next clip slide into the video rather than how you put it. The clip at 1:30 ends too abruptly, let it drag out a little. The last smooth of the triple airshot, I like what you did it with, having the scout fly into the camera so to speak, but you missed out on what the purpose of the smooth was for: the airshots. Aim it a bit higher and you're golden.
I really like the song and I enjoyed the video. Just touch up on some things and you'll be good to go.
kirbyYou embedded a broken video :o
it worked for me (Before he edited it too)
it worked for me (Before he edited it too)
harvest4kkirbyYou embedded a broken video :oit worked for me (Before he edited it too)
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it worked for me (Before he edited it too)[/quote]
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Just a viewers perspective.
The transitions between frags felt to fast. Like there was no time to embrace it.
Like the scout to medic clip just felt like. BOOM HERE'S SCOUT FOOTAGE! BAM! NOW SOME MEDIC!
The transitions between frags felt to fast. Like there was no time to embrace it.
Like the scout to medic clip just felt like. [b]BOOM HERE'S SCOUT FOOTAGE! BAM! NOW SOME MEDIC![/b]
kirbyYou embedded a broken video :o
"http://www.youtube.com/?feature=player_embedded";
edit: fixed
OKAY HELP TIME
The colors for Gullywash in the intro are really bright (welcome to Gullywash and video editing). A bit darker and it will be perfect. Practice your smooths and they'll turn out a lot smoother. Yours during the intro were good but they could be better. The first sniper clip goes too quickly. I think you may have done it cause the song is more upbeat? Not sure, but that's more of a personal opinion. At 0:26 it's kind of choppy, try recording at a higher FPS if you can.
I think your colors overall are a bit too bright now to think about it. Looking at that medic to medic crossbow airshot, you can barely see the kill notice let alone what it reads and even the kill itself. Might wanna tone that down.
The smooth/third person view of the red soldier before 0:47 is unnecessary, looks like you forgot to remove it or forgot to do something with it. The linear swipe @ 0:52 swipes to black and then the next clip shows. It's better to have the next clip slide into the video rather than how you put it. The clip at 1:30 ends too abruptly, let it drag out a little. The last smooth of the triple airshot, I like what you did it with, having the scout fly into the camera so to speak, but you missed out on what the purpose of the smooth was for: the airshots. Aim it a bit higher and you're golden.
I really like the song and I enjoyed the video. Just touch up on some things and you'll be good to go.
Thx dude, I will try to mend
"http://www.youtube.com/?feature=player_embedded"
edit: fixed
OKAY HELP TIME
The colors for Gullywash in the intro are really bright (welcome to Gullywash and video editing). A bit darker and it will be perfect. Practice your smooths and they'll turn out a lot smoother. Yours during the intro were good but they could be better. The first sniper clip goes too quickly. I think you may have done it cause the song is more upbeat? Not sure, but that's more of a personal opinion. At 0:26 it's kind of choppy, try recording at a higher FPS if you can.
I think your colors overall are a bit too bright now to think about it. Looking at that medic to medic crossbow airshot, you can barely see the kill notice let alone what it reads and even the kill itself. Might wanna tone that down.
The smooth/third person view of the red soldier before 0:47 is unnecessary, looks like you forgot to remove it or forgot to do something with it. The linear swipe @ 0:52 swipes to black and then the next clip shows. It's better to have the next clip slide into the video rather than how you put it. The clip at 1:30 ends too abruptly, let it drag out a little. The last smooth of the triple airshot, I like what you did it with, having the scout fly into the camera so to speak, but you missed out on what the purpose of the smooth was for: the airshots. Aim it a bit higher and you're golden.
I really like the song and I enjoyed the video. Just touch up on some things and you'll be good to go.[/quote]
Thx dude, I will try to mend