if youre at the worst levels and think your dm is "good" while doing sub 200 dpm as scout then your dm isn't as good as you think it actually is and you should work on your aim a bit more
unpopular opinion but it's pretty much pointless to develop your gamesense as scout if you miss 50% of your shots, once you actually have good dm and break into the upper echelons of skill is when you should work on gamesense imo
if you really want someone to watch your demo though, id do it and stream it for you but i wouldnt be surprised if most of it is you losing fights that you can easily win with better aim and movement