Shoosh
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Signed Up April 7, 2013
Last Posted January 12, 2023 at 2:44 PM
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#2 fps config in Customization

https://gyazo.com/4e4f7e6e296ddd379d2b49728fbaaabb

aint clicking dat shit

posted about 8 years ago
#7 Help me correct my essay in Off Topic
cinderShoosh*help*
Yeah, I get that. Thanks.

It's quite similar to my own language. We just use commas more and create super-long sentences whereas an English speaker would rather use a dot and start a new sentence. That might have affected my essay as the first paragraph is essentially 3 sentences.

As to the synonyms, I really tried to research the words' meanings and usage in sentences so that it fits the text well. Although, I'm not a 100% sure with all of them.

Honestly I dont think any of the synonyms dont match just saying be wary:) In english super long sentences are seen as bad and simplistic. To be advanced just use commas. If you wanted to be super advanced you could use colons, semicolons and hyphens. Although I think colons, semicolons and hyphens are a lot easier to use and understand than complex sentences:)

posted about 8 years ago
#4 Help me correct my essay in Off Topic
cinderAny material you could recommend that would help with this?

Just be careful when using synonyms because they might mean something similar but dont make sense when in a specific context.

Any material, just google complex sentence structure.

A quick overview is
Main clause - Makes sense when saying it on its own
Sub clause - Doesn't make sense on its own, but does when accompanied by a main clause.

Simple (one main clause) - I went to the shop
Compound (two main clauses) - I went to the shop and I bought some chocolate.
Complex (One main clause and a sub clause) - I went to the shop, that is up the road, and bought some chocolate.

If you said "that is up the road" on its own it doesnt make sense
But if you say "I went to the shop, that is up the road..." it makes sense.
The tricky thing about complex sentences is that the sub clause is in the middle of the main clause and is seperated by commas.

The way were recommended to know if its a complex sentence is to read the whole sentence and ignore anything in the commas:

Eg. I went to the shop, that is up the road, and bought some chocolate. If i remove the commas it becomes
I went to the shop and bought some chocolate - it still makes sense and is therefore a main clause.
While That is up the road doesnt make sense at all on its own but does when with the main clause.

Kinda confusing, hope it helps.

posted about 8 years ago
#2 Help me correct my essay in Off Topic

Wtf, I'm English and have never used some of these words in my entire life. Did you use word to find synonyms and use them?
also I think the comparison to a fictional character isn't suitable in this, just my opinion. It seems like you forced another two sentences to reach the character limit.

He is continuously making progress and even venturing into new fields such as artificial intelligence as of late with his most recent company OpenAI.

Into

He is continuously making progress and is, as of lately, even venturing into new fields such as artificial intelligence with his most recent company OpenAI.

It sounds more fluid and adds more complexity to the sentence.

I recommend you look into complex and compund sentence structure to help here.

posted about 8 years ago
#14 What bread do you have with a kebab? in Off Topic

Naan

posted about 8 years ago
#69 DRACKK JOINS REASON! Ownage Squad set to fold. in TF2 General Discussion
sheepy_dogs_handBasically the nuking of Japan was horrific but necessary as the Japanese would have never surrendered otherwise.

You cant justify the nuking of a country and the murder of 100,000's of people like that. How do you know there was no other way? You werent even alive at the time. You cant say there was no other way because there probably was the nuking just seemed to be the option that was taken.

posted about 8 years ago
#24 Zebbosai leaves Reason Gaming in News
DavidTheWinTake Drackk and make the top team in Europe two thirds Brit

DavidTheWin is in on it....

posted about 8 years ago
#130 No explosion smoke script in Customization

https://mega.nz/#!QhIVXB6a!nfPOah_xHu2Yw_BZK-id1JFdGVwggcEBMV5kV8DO8FM like this?

posted about 8 years ago
#7 I need a monitor! in Hardware

Would recommend XL2411Z for reasons stated above, the only problem with it is that the controls on the monitor are quite fiddly, but when are they not:)

posted about 8 years ago
#16 Need help with a cat. in Off Topic

Either way take your cat to the vet, theres no way you can diagnose the cat and treat it yourself. Vets go to uni for 6 years for this shit. Hope its ok though.

posted about 8 years ago
#18 Team Infused Return in TF2 General Discussion

adysky and Quik to slam on nerds.

posted about 8 years ago
#57 A glaring issue with projectile hitboxes in TF2 General Discussion

So does this explain why half the time when jumping of the wall my rocket gets eaten by the fucking wall? (Fuck snakewater)

posted about 8 years ago
#28 I've been had - Need help/ideas in Off Topic
PendaSelling cannabis is a good market, especially in places where it's illegal. It's easy to get seeds online and it grows like a weed (hence the name)
hmu if you have any questions

Guy already made a bad choice, dont think he should do another ;0

posted about 8 years ago
#3885 Frag Clips Thread in Videos

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O_cSNS94cPA

posted about 8 years ago
#13 AGDQ 2016 in Off Topic

Live boys!

http://www.twitch.tv/gamesdonequick

posted about 8 years ago
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