I would recommend instead of recording with fraps recording with Lawena, or Source Recording Tool. In the future unless your video is heavily edited you should probably post it in the Frag Clips Thread you may also receive criticism because this website is centered around competitive tf2, and normally we are usually only interested in seeing clips from matches or pickup games.

As for advice just look at what makes other videos great, such as Grape's Rocket Science

https://youtu.be/ll2GLTdH-_8

my computer heats my room, try living in a smaller room

tf2center.com

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0LFR5slpOM3
as read by stoperr

fade is so good

tfw your team forgets to cut luxor first

suck my juicy glynis

bear
aiera

NA

take dxlevel out of your launch options

bo4r

just use comanglia's config :)

download configs to tf/cfg
port forward

http://i.imgur.com/y5FButM.png

sv_lan 0
sv_pure 2
sv_password whatever you want lol
exec configname
map mapname

most leagues disallow listen servers, but if you have a good enough cpu and upload speed you shuld be fine for scrims

Mirror the lights on second so the one isn't annoying to stand on

Hot Dads (3-1) vs. MMM PIPE IT UP (3-1)
Pizzagon eSports (2-2) vs. Team Vanilla Love (3-1)
I'm sorry (4-0) vs. Arstotzka (4-0)

do it like ESPN

http://i.imgur.com/XPbOpHV.png