Nit-Picky Notes:
- Should have just cut out the very first part of the intro, start with a 1-2 sec transition to stranger things parody
- Killfeed is both too large and the edges of the icons have white pixels around them
- Cutting between 2 genres like that with the music doesn't feel smooth, kind of ruined the transition you had going there
- At 2:19 there's a weird fish eye effect near the end but only on the bottom of the screen, probably should have been smoothed out a bit more
- During some of the slows it looked like you were losing some frames, maybe that's just me but it was definitely noticable
- Have to commit to either really fast of somewhat slow speed transitions the middle-ground you're at right now creates a really jumpy effect
- I saw you had some STV footage in there pre-frag clip, but throwing in some 3rd person rewinding clips or just 3rd person frags in general may have add some variety the editing style is otherwise lacking
This is everything I noticed that isn't entirely my own opinion/preferences. Besides the intro I didn't really see much of a unique style thrown in, so I'm not sure if that's what you were going for if you just haven't figured out the style yet. Either way, having that style helps define you as an editor as you progress and gives something for people to point out as "your thing". Overall, great work!