Alright its been a week and I STILL don't see anything happening on this thread so I'll just pop in some criticism.
I really fucking love your SFM work. Absolutely stunning and has progressively been getting better and better. I adore you for giving badlands that water makeover; I don't know how you did it, but it was amazing. Your colors, especially around 1:26, were astounding. I also loved the transition from 1:19-1:21. I also noticed some subtle details like your lense flares and composition in your smooths. Those were insane.
However some of the video's progression was very slow. Some shots were just a little bit too long and kind of cut off the flow. But I understand you might have done this to go with the song. Everything after 1:06 was very nice and exciting. :)
Well done Almie. Can't wait for your next piece. -Jeanette
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KanecoOverusing effects/particles, sometimes more doesn't equal better.
The viewmodels fov is too big, Idk why u went for a fov different than 70.
Excellent smoothing work!
Particles - Yes! I was filled with regret after I recorded the first couple frags and smooths, and there was no going back, I had to keep using the particles to show consistancy. But yes, agree, the pixels were a mistake! :)
Viewmodels - same as the particles.
Smoothing - Thank you! I've been practicing quite a lot and its very nice to get comments regarding this.
Tino_ok what are those particle effects? i want them, so sick
blood particles: http://tf2.gamebanana.com/sprites/5121
explosions: http://tf2.gamebanana.com/sprites/4564
rocket trail: http://tf2.gamebanana.com/sprites/4984
futurei love the style, watching this in 60 frames makes it so much better. im gunna ad ya, I wanna talk about some ideas!
sure thing! just waiting for your request now.
BrimstoneI really enjoyed that, but it did feel a bit jittery. Was it because you recorded at a normal speed then slowed things down during editing? I think recording at a much higher frame rate or recording at the desired speed would help.
I do like your style tho.
some were really choppy due to either the player experiencing lag issues or just my messy camera work. :) yes, I record my frags at 240 fps and my cines at 1920, so 'not enough frames' shouldn't be a problem.
glad you enjoyed the style.
BarytaQI liked this one, solid shots and camera work. It wasn't overedited and I really enjoyed it
Some sections were jittery (the opening, the sniper sequence on upward)
I like the explosives model with the shockwave. Gave every shot a punch.
Maybe lay off on the zoom in/out effect on shots a bit.
thanks! and yes, i agree with the jittery sections, they were either due to lag that the player was experiencing or my camera being a little messy... x) glad you enjoyed it, i'll take these thoughts into hand for the future.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZXadIDouNSQ
Constructive criticism welcome. I hope you enjoy.
song: Miguel - Do You... (Ark Patrol Remix)
frags: BaconRush, Fluffeh, Sigh, Shoosh
zeSIMONIt's so different. Thats why I like it.
Also that custom sniper "scoping-out-animation" looks cool :D
Thank you so much! Means a lot. =)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GRC_0MfrJiQ
Hey guys. *Please read the below before you watch the video!*
I know it might get some hate, but please think of the video as less of a fragshow and more of an art piece! =) Really hope you enjoy it, cheers!
-Urbans