Its been a while since I actually edited something but I still remember the criticisms and lessons I got from my previous movie and tried to apply it on this clip I made recently. 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DVT2THaMjZw&hd=1
If I could get more feedback on my editing and what I could have done better, that would be really appreciated.
			 
			
		Its been a while since I actually edited something but I still remember the criticisms and lessons I got from my previous movie and tried to apply it on this clip I made recently. 
[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DVT2THaMjZw&hd=1[/youtube]
If I could get more feedback on my editing and what I could have done better, that would be really appreciated.
		
		
	 
	
		
		
		
		
							
				didn't really see much wrong with it other than it ending abruptly
			 
			
		didn't really see much wrong with it other than it ending abruptly
		
		
	 
	
		
		
		
		
							
				There's a screenshake every second or something for what I assume is for emphasis. Why is there so much of it?
			 
			
		There's a screenshake every second or something for what I assume is for emphasis. Why is there so much of it?
		
		
	 
	
		
		
		
		
							
				youtube fucked up the quality, and you fucked up the gullywash skybox, other than that I like it
			 
			
		youtube fucked up the quality, and you fucked up the gullywash skybox, other than that I like it
		
		
	 
	
		
		
		
		
							
				turn down music and turn up game sounds
			 
			
		turn down music and turn up game sounds