Yankeehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p6WJYe6n-l8
that's one sweaty teenager
that's one sweaty teenager
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I0lRqrAXsqw was expecting this
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2xWfEoFSlFU greatest fragvid all time
its funny how frag vids 80 times worse than this have gotten many plus frags... just a thought. But really, this had so many badly used and unnecessary effects, at the very least if they had been used correctly the video would have been watchable. Try toning the effects down a little and learn how to use them, and use something a bit more original than dubstep.
the flow was amazing. you've actually got something really good here, but like flippers said, it'll take a lot of work to make it better.
Editing wasn't bad but too much lens flair for sure, most the effects you used are cliche, also use anything but dubstep and deathmetal for tf2, the tf2 community currently likes chill shit and rap.