(I read most of what Tob said sry if I repeat anything)
The content isn't all that boring really, but one thing you're missing is making your editing features pop. like at transition at 0:14 is sexxxxy but the colors are so similar to what it's changing to I didn't even notice it the first time around. For that specifically I'd probably recommend throwing a really strong filter on it as it pulls off screen so the colors clearly contrast the new frag footage.
A list of notes from a person who is obsessed with watching edits:
- The sounds as you switch views (like around 0:34) are too loud and not even 100% needed
- The music isn't really synced all that well which is okay sometimes but when the song is VERY lyrical (like the song you're using), that sync is needed or it just feels sloppy. If you aren't attached to the song I'd suggest something a bit more beat driven. This song could be very good in the end, but the syncing is gonna be rough.
- You really seem to like not having viewmodels, but you don't really seem to be doing it in a way that makes it look clean rather than a bit awkward. Take a look at this video by SynciNG (<3) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bhfOfDIbBYg and see how he incorporates transitions into even the viewmodels. I'm not saying steal his stuff, just get some inspiration in that area I guess