If you're looking for feedback the main issue I had with the AIDS joke was a lack of focus.
Good satire has a focus, and a clear idea of what it wants to criticise. Like criticising the ridiculous praise some drunken Irish football fans got (I'm aware this one is a little niche, but trust me, it's pretty spot on). Or more recently, the suspension of democratically elected British parliament under Boris.
Both of those articles keep focus on what they're criticising, and don't overreach. In the case of the AIDS joke, it felt it served no purpose. As if the whole point of the AIDS thing was just an excuse to shit on b4nny/yoshi/sigafoo, which is fine, if that's what you're going for.