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san francisco - frag clip
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#1
22 Frags +

hi, colours got a pretty good reception so i'm pretty happy to present a new clip, a bit longer this time and featuring primarily demos from tf.tv. I wanted a really upbeat, happy feel and I think I achieved that. I personally feel it's an improvement to colours but you can be the judge.

as always, criticism is very very much appreciated, i'm constantly looking to improve and your comments can make a big difference.

thanks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d3v25aHYT2w

hi, colours got a pretty good reception so i'm pretty happy to present a new clip, a bit longer this time and featuring primarily demos from tf.tv. I wanted a really upbeat, happy feel and I think I achieved that. I personally feel it's an improvement to colours but you can be the judge.

as always, criticism is very very much appreciated, i'm constantly looking to improve and your comments can make a big difference.

thanks

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d3v25aHYT2w
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#2
0 Frags +

i love it. awesome song, smooths, clips

i love it. awesome song, smooths, clips
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#3
2 Frags +

good vibes :) thanks for sharing

good vibes :) thanks for sharing
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#4
2 Frags +

It was really good I just feel like you used too many smooths. That might just be me but I felt like there were 3 setting up each clip and it seemed unnecessary

It was really good I just feel like you used too many smooths. That might just be me but I felt like there were 3 setting up each clip and it seemed unnecessary
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#5
0 Frags +

my god you're so facking good at this.
+1, subscribe, like, all that jazz.

my god you're so facking good at this.
+1, subscribe, like, all that jazz.
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#6
0 Frags +

Awesome! Really entertaining to watch. Good work (:

Awesome! Really entertaining to watch. Good work (:
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#7
2 Frags +
LazyPandaIt was really good I just feel like you used too many smooths. That might just be me but I felt like there were 3 setting up each clip and it seemed unnecessary

I got that from a few people while making it, personally I like the smooths but that may just be because of the time I put into them. I'll be trying to find a better balance in my next video, whatever that may be so I appreciate the feedback.

[quote=LazyPanda]It was really good I just feel like you used too many smooths. That might just be me but I felt like there were 3 setting up each clip and it seemed unnecessary[/quote]
I got that from a few people while making it, personally I like the smooths but that may just be because of the time I put into them. I'll be trying to find a better balance in my next video, whatever that may be so I appreciate the feedback.
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#8
0 Frags +

good shit man keep it up

good shit man keep it up
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#9
1 Frags +

destroyed ronny

destroyed ronny
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#10
0 Frags +

wow that was great

wow that was great
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#11
1 Frags +

the first demo frag doesn't actually show the pipe connecting during the smoothed part. The text at the ends was too formal to be friendly but too cartoony to be official, it just looked completely out of place. Apart from that, it was a very well made video that looked like you put a lot of effort into.

It didn't feel like a frag video though. The edits took away from the frags. I just never felt impressed by any of the players, because you focused more on the aesthetics of the game than the people clicking on scrubs.

the first demo frag doesn't actually show the pipe connecting during the smoothed part. The text at the ends was too formal to be friendly but too cartoony to be official, it just looked completely out of place. Apart from that, it was a very well made video that looked like you put a lot of effort into.

It didn't feel like a frag video though. The edits took away from the frags. I just never felt impressed by any of the players, because you focused more on the aesthetics of the game than the people clicking on scrubs.
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#12
-11 Frags +

nice dude youve gone from videos where i can tell who fragged who to videos where im not even sure its tf2 anymore

idk why everybody learns vega/ae/mb just to make the same fucking videos that everybody else makes

nice dude youve gone from videos where i can tell who fragged who to videos where im not even sure its tf2 anymore

idk why everybody learns vega/ae/mb just to make the same fucking videos that everybody else makes
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#13
9 Frags +
mnice dude youve gone from videos where i can tell who fragged who to videos where im not even sure its tf2 anymore

idk why everybody learns vega/ae/mb just to make the same fucking videos that everybody else makes

I'm sorry you didn't enjoy it.

[quote=m]nice dude youve gone from videos where i can tell who fragged who to videos where im not even sure its tf2 anymore

idk why everybody learns vega/ae/mb just to make the same fucking videos that everybody else makes[/quote]
I'm sorry you didn't enjoy it.
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#14
0 Frags +

Really enjoyed, very nice smooths, and frags. Was a fun watch, and I truely do appreciate you sharing !~

Really enjoyed, very nice smooths, and frags. Was a fun watch, and I truely do appreciate you sharing !~
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#15
1 Frags +

good stuff tay! loved it!

good stuff tay! loved it!
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#16
-1 Frags +
mnice dude youve gone from videos where i can tell who fragged who to videos where im not even sure its tf2 anymore

idk why everybody learns vega/ae/mb just to make the same fucking videos that everybody else makes

shut up

also nice video tay, loved the smooths :)

[quote=m]nice dude youve gone from videos where i can tell who fragged who to videos where im not even sure its tf2 anymore

idk why everybody learns vega/ae/mb just to make the same fucking videos that everybody else makes[/quote]

shut up

also nice video tay, loved the smooths :)
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#17
0 Frags +

that was fucking amazing
i usually don't like edited frag movies, but that was great

that was fucking amazing
i usually don't like edited frag movies, but that was great
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#18
10 Frags +

eh mason's kinda right even if he was a dick about it. the video seemed more about the editing than the frags

eh mason's kinda right even if he was a dick about it. the video seemed more about the editing than the frags
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#19
1 Frags +
scrimshaweh mason's kinda right even if he was a dick about it. the video seemed more about the editing than the frags

I think what mason is saying is perfectly valid, but the emphasis is supposed to be more so on the editing than the frags. I definitely understand if that isn't really your cup of tea and in that sense maybe "frag clip" is a misleading title. either way I appreciate the comments so far, and thanks for watching.

[quote=scrimshaw]eh mason's kinda right even if he was a dick about it. the video seemed more about the editing than the frags[/quote]
I think what mason is saying is perfectly valid, but the emphasis is supposed to be more so on the editing than the frags. I definitely understand if that isn't really your cup of tea and in that sense maybe "frag clip" is a misleading title. either way I appreciate the comments so far, and thanks for watching.
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#20
2 Frags +

love it!

love it!
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#21
0 Frags +

10/10

10/10
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#22
2 Frags +

Look guys, I'm quite sure that the video, as it was an application to PP, was supposed to portray tayw's editing skills more than anything. Since that was the case, really nice job tayw. :)

If it were something normal you'd release though, I'd agree with some of the stuff said here. Mostly just the obscurity of the frags.

Look guys, I'm quite sure that the video, as it was an application to PP, was supposed to portray tayw's editing skills more than anything. Since that was the case, really nice job tayw. :)

If it were something normal you'd release though, I'd agree with some of the stuff said here. Mostly just the obscurity of the frags.
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#23
0 Frags +

Makes me feel happy, cool editing, great vibes.

Makes me feel happy, cool editing, great vibes.
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#24
0 Frags +

you're gonna go far kid

i sure wish i knew what music outside of electronic was

you're gonna go far kid

i sure wish i knew what music outside of electronic was
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