Opinion about that Fragmovie

#1

LemonStarDude

0 Frags – +

Hey, i just started with editing and i would like to have an other opinion.
Tips are also appreciated!
Its just one frag because someone ask me if i could do it for him.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lPbQrKADB6w&feature=youtu.be

#2

penda

1 Frags – +

The editing isn't that bad but the content is kind of not so great.

#3

rocketslay

4 Frags – +

cut out all the stuff before the airshot and it would be alright as part of a larger fragmovie

#4

LemonStarDude

3 Frags – +

Okay.Thank you!

#5

ward3d

2 Frags – +

that might be too much motion blur