Title says it all, please criticize me on what you think I can change/improve.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TiQS5TaYyEc
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Title says it all, please criticize me on what you think I can change/improve.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TiQS5TaYyEc
Thanks :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TiQS5TaYyEc
Thanks :)
i like some of the ideas but they could stand to be a little more crisp. maybe i'm just spoiled by googlers videos but he does some similar things that work better. I think it might be the tempo of your music holding you back the most. you use some cool stuff but syncing it up with such a slow song means theres too much emphasis on the acoutrements and not enough on the part where heads are getting clicked.
heres the googler video that comes to mind most: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x4JFn0EPpyA
i like some of the ideas but they could stand to be a little more crisp. maybe i'm just spoiled by googlers videos but he does some similar things that work better. I think it might be the tempo of your music holding you back the most. you use some cool stuff but syncing it up with such a slow song means theres too much emphasis on the acoutrements and not enough on the part where heads are getting clicked.
heres the googler video that comes to mind most: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x4JFn0EPpyA
heres the googler video that comes to mind most: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x4JFn0EPpyA
editing is fairly good. sfm parts could be timed better. music doesnt work great imo
editing is fairly good. sfm parts could be timed better. music doesnt work great imo
- same as knsume
- don't show projectile hitbox at 0:30 scout kill
- kill at 0:44 is not video worthy
- too quick on the viewpoint changes both in intro and at 0:48
- bad slows at 1:15
- zoom doesnt work with fade at 0:08
- stutter at 0:22
- maybe a bit too much sfm but thats personal preference
- some jumpy transitions throughout the video
sorry for nit-picking but I guess that's kind of what you were asking for
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[*] same as knsume
[*] don't show projectile hitbox at 0:30 scout kill
[*] kill at 0:44 is not video worthy
[*] too quick on the viewpoint changes both in intro and at 0:48
[*] bad slows at 1:15
[*] zoom doesnt work with fade at 0:08
[*] stutter at 0:22
[*] maybe a bit too much sfm but thats personal preference
[*] some jumpy transitions throughout the video
[/list]
sorry for nit-picking but I guess that's kind of what you were asking for
[*] same as knsume
[*] don't show projectile hitbox at 0:30 scout kill
[*] kill at 0:44 is not video worthy
[*] too quick on the viewpoint changes both in intro and at 0:48
[*] bad slows at 1:15
[*] zoom doesnt work with fade at 0:08
[*] stutter at 0:22
[*] maybe a bit too much sfm but thats personal preference
[*] some jumpy transitions throughout the video
[/list]
sorry for nit-picking but I guess that's kind of what you were asking for
Please don't take offense to this. I think that what you did is cool and all, but I personally think you over-edited it. I prefer someone just timing the frags with the music and letting the frags speak. Also at 1:26 onwards it's just black space, I don't know if that was intentional.
Please don't take offense to this. I think that what you did is cool and all, but I personally think you over-edited it. I prefer someone just timing the frags with the music and letting the frags speak. Also at 1:26 onwards it's just black space, I don't know if that was intentional.
I don't mind the nitpicking, im really happy you took the time to watch and give me feedback, thanks alot!
I don't mind the nitpicking, im really happy you took the time to watch and give me feedback, thanks alot!
Overall it was pretty good, but still quite a few noticeable problems.
Remember not to edit to the point that the clip feels hard to watch, most obviously for me from 0:22-0:40, i feel like if you want to make a good frag movie then you shouldn't try to zoom in and edit every individual clip, but only the meaningful or impressive clips.
Speaking of impressive, please for the love of god do not add to the piles of pub frag movies, I can't speak for others but pub frag movies have little to nothing other than editing value.
Don't use too much SFM, I did like the intro but I feel like it dragged on a bit.
Overall it was pretty good, but still quite a few noticeable problems.
Remember not to edit to the point that the clip feels hard to watch, most obviously for me from 0:22-0:40, i feel like if you want to make a good frag movie then you shouldn't try to zoom in and edit every individual clip, but only the meaningful or impressive clips.
Speaking of impressive, please for the love of god do not add to the piles of pub frag movies, I can't speak for others but pub frag movies have little to nothing other than editing value.
Don't use too much SFM, I did like the intro but I feel like it dragged on a bit.
Remember not to edit to the point that the clip feels hard to watch, most obviously for me from 0:22-0:40, i feel like if you want to make a good frag movie then you shouldn't try to zoom in and edit every individual clip, but only the meaningful or impressive clips.
Speaking of impressive, please for the love of god do not add to the piles of pub frag movies, I can't speak for others but pub frag movies have little to nothing other than editing value.
Don't use too much SFM, I did like the intro but I feel like it dragged on a bit.
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