So, there's this essay competition at my school and my friend and I are both participating. Problem is his English is godlike and he even got help from an Australian linguist or some shit. So I wanted to ask you tf.tv whether there are any English language fanatics, grammar nazis or just about anyone really who'd wanna review my essay and give me constructive feedback on it.

I'd prefer if you sent me a private message rather than commenting on the thread just so that every review is as unbiased as possible. Thanks to everyone who's willing to help me.

The question is: Is Elon Musk a great man? Nothing else. We were supposed to research everything ourselves. The limit is 600 words (which I hit perfectly). Though, I think the essay needs changes, especially the ending.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/m4xr7vyvtr2lt8h/An%20essay%20about%20Elon%20Musk.docx?dl=0

Isn't AMS Finnish?

FUCKING NINJA'D

I have sort of relevant question. Where can I find the exact same explosion praticles as grape has in the first video?

Is there any way to sort their stuff by what's in stock and what's not?

Pick up a guitar. You won't regret it.

Well, this year has only been like 3 days. He's kinda lacking competition.

My 8 y/o sister gave me a small wrapped paper box. Inside was nothing. She said she had given me air.

Although, it's nice that at least she bothered unlike my 16 y/o brother.

Can't recommend Brothers - A Tale of Two Sons enough. It's an absolutely stunning game. It's more of a one-play game, though, cause the story follows a strictly driven pattern but, oh my god, is the story good. Definitely worth purchasing, especially if you have someone to play it with (co-op). I did with my younger brother which made it twice as good.

A shirt and a jumper.

quizzaciously

I'm sure this has been asked like a million times so I apologize but it's really an annoying issue.

So when I'm playing the game occasionally freezes for a few seconds. Rocket trails disappear, players teleport, etc.
Here are all my specs:

Speedtest:

Autoexec:

Gfx cfg:

Net graph:

Computer specs:

I think the problem might be that I live with 6 people in one house all using the same wifi/cabel. Usually around 2-3 people watch Youtube. That hasn't bothered me in the past, though. The game ran smoothly like 4-5 months ago.

EDIT: It mostly happens when I die/get a kill but isn't limited to these occasions.

Any advice?

Watch 'n learn.

Hello there, RedRidingNope, you know what else you could ride tonight? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

https://youtu.be/v-MApVvos2Y

Fear of failure is your number one enemy. Learn to overcome it.

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amazing how a thread can be derailed thanks to just one insult