DraGuLawow you guys are welcoming... I guess I landed on the wrong site no? I mean all you did was cut me down and didnt even add anything constructive. I really dont get that. I am new to this site obviously and was just looking for some people to join our new clan but guess a few bold words and underlined text threw you all off. Tried to make it easier to pick out the keypoints that our clan has but guess you didnt get the memo?
I think that you should try to split up your ideas into paragraphs. Even though it'll still be a wall of text, it'll be much easier to read. Large walls of text are intimidating to read. Adding spacing between ideas and concepts helps people feel less intimidated by a post. Also, proper grammar is pretty important, since having poor grammar is generally makes people look down upon your writing.
Also, I said it was awkward bolding because of how the server IP and your email are like 9/10ths bold/underlined/italics instead of the whole thing. I understand why you'd want to bold the other parts, but it'd be better if you made a spaced list of some sort instead of bolded parts in the middle of your huge paragraph (if it was spaced out and multi-paragraph it'd look much better). The bold also highlights the poor structure of your lists, since the forward slashes include long clauses.
Anyways, you should try to run a spell/grammar check on your text so that it can catch some mistakes like melle instead of melee. Hope this helps.
EDIT: Whoa, that escalated quickly. Using expletives when you're new a community makes you look unprofessional and attracts bad attention towards your organization (in this case, server/clan). First impressions matter a lot, you shouldn't be so rash (especially since that language was uncalled for, nobody actually insulted you). I was only trying to give you constructive criticism on how to post something like that :(.