I think it would have made sense to put the title/flyover thing at the start and to have it take place on the same map that the frags are on. Currently looks like it's transitioning to a granary frag clip that's not there

i'm planning on adding some other frags, sorry didn't mention that.

The quality of the video itself didn´t look that good...
Also the viewmodel, make sure you can´t look `inside` the arm.

You did literally 0 editing apart from the smooth, and that can barely considered an edit. There wasn't even a synch with the music. There's lot of things you can work with to get a synch with music, be it the frags itself, velocity, lightning, even transitions.

As for the last part, it's just an out of place smooth with a very generic lettering, there's nothing really special with it. But, it's fine for a first try, just keep messing around with it, watch some tutorials online, watch other edits/fragmovies to get ideas, etc etc, and you will eventually get better

alright thanks for the tips, will do.

EDIT: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-E6kER8aYW4&feature=youtu.be also when next one I upload will have all your advice incorporated.

the lobby king? who calls him that?

idk he told me to do that so whatever, doesn't really matter.

the smoothed intro doesn't need to be 20 seconds of showcasing a part of a map. i feel like the clips end a little abruptly and don't transition into each other very well. also i get that this is the footage you have and that's fine and all, but these are just one or two pretty average frags a clip. this is bad because you're gonna have to cut from clip to clip in pretty short intervals, which makes the whole thing feel rushed and unimpressive imo. also, i think leaving the in-game sound in and at a level where it doesn't compete with the music would make this more appealing.

gl, hopefully i don't sound like an idiot :x

alright thank you, will do :>