I liked this one, solid shots and camera work. It wasn't overedited and I really enjoyed it

Some sections were jittery (the opening, the sniper sequence on upward)

I like the explosives model with the shockwave. Gave every shot a punch.

Maybe lay off on the zoom in/out effect on shots a bit.

It looks really cool, but.

I feel like it's missing something... raw? As in, the edit is fantastic, but it's kinda hiding all the frags.
You could've used a little less slow-mo, even though it goes really well with the song.

Overall good job.

i did not really like the shockwave effect, but that's just my opinion. Overall well edited with nice frags. Good short video.

MIGUEL

thanks! and yes, i agree with the jittery sections, they were either due to lag that the player was experiencing or my camera being a little messy... x) glad you enjoyed it, i'll take these thoughts into hand for the future.

rocket launcher with original sound effects...

I am one completely for not having every video having an electronic song, but this one just didn't feel right. It was a little slow, and although you synced the effects very well with it, it didn't get my hyped while watching the video

The frags were sweet for the most part, I agree with r4ndom that you should try and throw a few unedited, easier to view frags. Your editing is not excessive, just too consistent.

I did not like how sometimes the frag was jumps or jittery or stuttered a little. I don't know if that was on purpose, but it was yucky :X

Fine for a short clip, I was just nitpicking :D.

Nice amount of editing, and a good job overall.

I will say that the explosion effect seemed more than a little overdone. It's possible to do it in a way that's barely noticable. That might be better. Example: https://youtu.be/QXUw5qvWH80

these particles were cool af

For playing I like a high viewmodel fov but I feel like it was a bit too much in this.

I really enjoyed that, but it did feel a bit jittery. Was it because you recorded at a normal speed then slowed things down during editing? I think recording at a much higher frame rate or recording at the desired speed would help.

I do like your style tho.

I don't know what's with slow-mo and these funkyvision/theenigma/etc editors. Every clip should be called Slowclips instead of Fragclips
If you want your frag to be so absolutely forgettable, send to one of these guys something to make a slowclip for you.
I don't even know who's hitting who.

some were really choppy due to either the player experiencing lag issues or just my messy camera work. :) yes, I record my frags at 240 fps and my cines at 1920, so 'not enough frames' shouldn't be a problem.
glad you enjoyed the style.

ok what are those particle effects? i want them, so sick

i love the style, watching this in 60 frames makes it so much better. im gunna ad ya, I wanna talk about some ideas!

this is epic thought

sure thing! just waiting for your request now.

blood particles: http://tf2.gamebanana.com/sprites/5121
explosions: http://tf2.gamebanana.com/sprites/4564
rocket trail: http://tf2.gamebanana.com/sprites/4984

hey, been around since you released your abyss clip, it's really cool seeing how you've gotten better. although i think the sniper sound effects are kinda quiet, but besides that i really enjoyed it!

Seriously though why did the stock rocket launcher make the original sound?

IT WAS ME I HAD THE LAGGY DEMOS SORRY MY INTERNET IS NOT BEING RUBBISH NOW SO I WONT HAVE TO GIVE LAGGY DEMOS

I thought the blocky, orange, pixillated sprites were a little (okay, a lot) much. Made me question whether this was a 2d platformer or a FPS game with them piling up everywhere. It made the frags seem a lot less "clean", and distracted a bit. Otherwise, the slow-fast transitions were great, and I liked how you portrayed the situation before the frag occurred.

My criticism (both positive and negative)

That lettering at the begining looked awfully simplistic/out of place compared to the amount of work put in the rest of the video

Overusing effects/particles, sometimes more doesn't equal better. For example I loved synch with the song the pipe firing and the explosion effect at 00:30. I think the explosion effect really fit the sound of the gun, kind of like a bubbly feeling if you get what I mean, but every time u used that explosion effect after that I felt turned off and it looked really out of place. Where as for example I really like the rocket trail smooth u used at 00:22, looked really cool with that effect, but used in every shot and every frag after that it looked a bit too much.

I really liked the transition you did at 1:00, looked very original except the blue thingy, I kinda get what you were going for but that element looked a bit rushed / out of place.

The viewmodels fov is too big, Idk why u went for a fov different than 70.

Excellent smoothing work!

Particles - Yes! I was filled with regret after I recorded the first couple frags and smooths, and there was no going back, I had to keep using the particles to show consistancy. But yes, agree, the pixels were a mistake! :)
Viewmodels - same as the particles.
Smoothing - Thank you! I've been practicing quite a lot and its very nice to get comments regarding this.

I loved the song, transitions, and effects, but the recordings are little skippy and "laggy" like.

I understand that everyone has their preferences, but this must be the dumbest way of voicing yours. If you want your opinion to actually mean anything to the editor (which I'm assuming you do, otherwise you wouldn't be bothered giving it), the last thing you need to do is be an ass.

As far as the video itself goes, I'm not quite certain on the lack of a kill feed. I'm guessing you removed it because you thought it would take away from the emotion/experience you were giving the video, but I personally don't think it does. I understand what's going on in the video, so maybe it's just my lack of experience watching frag vids without a kill feed making it uncomfortable.

The video itself was awesome either way. The particles were great.

I love everything you do on this channel, keep it up dude

It's a bit too much for me, but it's beautifully done

love the cubis rl particals