my eyes

i instantly got a headache

maybe for your next frag vid if u make one u can decrease the intro time? half of it is just looking at people running around in a map. cool frags though even if they are hard to make out.

O_O

The first 40 seconds of an 80 second video was intro

and probably half of the rest was transitions

I like really heavily edited stuff, but this is just way too bright to even be able to appreciate anything about it. It literally hurt my eyes to watch.

just because u can follow 9 after effects tutorials doesnt mean u should use them all in the same video

also by now whenever i read "funky visions" at the beginning of clips i might as well be reading "epilepsy warning" because all of u mongoloids keep making shit thats more spazzy and strobed out than the last batch

also ur ratio of footage to bullshit was about 10/90

I probably would have liked it if it were less bright, honestly. Pretty decent editing, just waaaaaay too bright.

Don't let something as simple as having your net gain too high ruin your good frag videos, dude. Keep it up with the editing, you're improving a lot!

thanks, i'm pretty use to the hate so it's like whatever at this point. When i was editing it, it really didn't show up as bright as the end project, but theres not much i can now other then move on.

i didnt even know i was prone to epileptic seizures before i watched this video

this was shit, you are shit

nigga u cant even see the kill feed

Why do you even post here? You know nobody will like it? Like why even post? Are you a troll? i dont understand

your post sounds mean / like a shitpost.. but it's actually exactly what i'm thinking.
looking at his prior posts/videos, i wouldn't be surprised if he's just "trolling"

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ItVSVH5fsD8&feature=youtu.be
tried to take out most of the brightness, maybe the frags will be easier to see. Looks kinda ugly because it took out a lot of the colors, but i guess its better than the original.

I enjoyed it, no need to be so negative. I think I can see what you wanted to create and I can appreciate that. If it wasn't as bright then I think it would have been really good man! Nice frags, nice tune.

Less is more, go watch grapes work.

The intro was imo very well made, but at the end when the lights starting flashing I knew this was heading in the wrong direction, a shame tho

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qn977W9HjWM

You need to watch beater

in this video:

four airshots that are repeated 3 times each
one mediocre headshot
one okay headshot
one fourty second intro

that's all folks

maybe you should edit some jump videos instead of frag videos, but obviously do what you want. if you want to go nuts with editing, i think it's better to do that there because a lot of it is cool aesthetics, but when people watch a frag video the frags and the aim is the most important thing.

i like that you had a theme and you used editing to portray it really well. Personally, wasn't too bright for me. I really like it 8/10

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ySly2A3X22o
If you're going to put a ton of crazy editing in you should try and make it look something like this instead of burning our eyes out on every frag. Other than that I guess it was an ok little video.

I'm declining your application but don't let that discourage you. Keep working on your craft and you'll improve, we need more video editors in this community.

intro is crystal clear but then the main part aka frags are mushed into pixel porridge with that retardedly strong lens bloom, WHY.

free migraine

Are you fucking serious TF.TV? Whenever someone posts an edit this happens again and AGAIN. This guy clearly put effort into his edit with the intention of making it as good as possible. So your shitposts such as "my eyes", "instantly got a headache" etc. really dont help the editor, the tf2 editing community or the tf2 community as a whole. If you dont like edited clips, it doesnt mean nobody likes them, and unless you have constructive feedback to offer, i suggest you keep your shitposts to yourself.

Why not? Its a TF2 Videos section. The section description says "editing" as well. Also its interesting you say nobody will like it, because you are using a "i dont like it therefore nobody will like it" logic.

No, Beater makes fragshows which fulfill an entirely different purpose than edits. He has nothing to learn from Beater. If he should watch anything, its other well-made edits, which I assume hes already doing.

This mini-rant doesnt apply to people who actually gave constructive criticism in this thread without shitposting.

As for my opinion on the clip, I actually really like the colours, no they are not "too bright" ffs, however, the glow is too strong in SOME shots. I suggest you tweak your colour settings for each shot separately. What is bright in one clip, might not be in another and such. For example @ 0:22 that process smooth really was too bright, mainly because its main focus is the sky which is generally pretty bright. So to fix the "brightness" you should have only gone to each shot that is bright and fix it there, not change every shot. Tbh the colours in the dreams version are much more interesting than the ones in dark dreams version. Also I noticed youre using probably Edge Softness in MBL, or some other similar thing. You should only apply it to the very edges and make it much more subtle or its gonna make the whole clip blurry and hard to watch. Also, I wouldnt really apply it to POV footage at all as it blurs the killfeed. It works well for smooths though. And about that small segment from 0:34 to 0:38, I dont know, I think you couldve come up with something better there. In the future I also suggest you play around with velocity a bit more, the one you had in this clip was a little too basic, though it worked pretty well nonetheless. Overall, I can see talent for editing, all you need is to edit more to get that polished look. Good luck!