--Saltysally1
-- http://steamcommunity.com/id/jai37
--high open or above plz
-- stv :( if it's a problem i have pov on desktop pc :3 http://www.mediafire.com/?uo6sfo0fpdv6133
-- I play demo an sorry I left that out the first time

this demo was reviewed

- [WKZBJDMM] Doctor
- http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561197997103711
- Medic
- Low; any really, I'm working myself into div6 so I lack them skills
- http://anfo.pl/20120904_2216_cp_process_b10fix_red_kupa.dem, P-REC

As noted above, I'm new to comp. so if you're looking to review a higher level play, you'd best not waste your time on mine ;)

*edit: I'd also like to add that this was the 3rd time I've played with that team, and that was the first time any of us played cp_process

Broken link

stickied

Whoopsie, put it in the wrong dir. Should work now. Thanks for pointing it out.

it makes too much sense!

bump, need dis.

saltysally mention the class you play and want help with so that someone can decide if they will be able to help you!

Shit sorry, I told you I need help

bump

--Koobadoobs
--http://steamcommunity.com/id/Koobadoobs/
--Engineer (Yes, HL)
--any
--http://dl.dropbox.com/u/53970822/Hnggg%20Demos/20120904_2116_koth_ashville_rc1_hnggg_corn.dem

why are you bumping a stickied thread

Saltysally

Has this thread been somewhat successful?

--nja
--http://steamcommunity.com/id/captainninjapants/
--Scout
--Mid+ (in open), any IM or Invite
--http://www.mediafire.com/?ot3c9fu5bxsaa3k

As a first season scout for the Pwr Rangers, I wouldn't mind any tips if constructive. This was one of my worst games, and my DM has improved since. My positioning, however, has remained almost the same. If anyone would review this, I'd be very thankful. Thanks for taking the time to review, this really helps me out!

Edited for clarification.

Not yet.

i bumped a stickied thread because even stickied threads don't show up on the homescreen if they aren't active.

Sometimes I gotta wonder if you're just trying to create a persona that is as hated as possible.

kinda tough, only people to have posted are a beginner medic, a HL Engineer, and 1 scout who wants a High level scout to look at his

I think if you are going to post a demo, if you could maybe go into some detail on things you'd like the reviewer to look out for (eg in situation x I feel I did the wrong thing etc etc). I think it makes it easier to highlight specific problems that YOU feel you are having. Obviously it's good if the reviewer finds these things themselves, but when I'm given demo's I usually ask people to highlight a few key moments, despite the fact I will review the full demo.

Simple things like "my positioning is eeeH" aren't really helpful.

Got it, I'll take a look at my demo tomorrow and try to pick some moments when I could have played better.

the icon for a stickied thread is a sticky bomb thts fucking adorable

I finally set up a decent stream thanks to Lansky's guide. So I will be doing a stream of the various demo reviews that fit my "skill." So post away =3

First one is for the BTMPL
Link for anyone curious http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/331944330

PS this is the first time I've streamed so some things need to be improved, so feel free to comment on things.

Someone who's stepping up :). Thank you and good job!

Hi and again, thans for reviewing my demo :)

I see that I need to work on those scouts not getting their buffes at start / midfight, but also see that they aren't comming back to me abough, forcing me to run up to them to give heals. Also, that lack of uber flash on demo while he was jumping really messed him up.

Since that game I've rebind the scoreboard to more accessible key so I try to keep the team updated on spawners and active players count.

Also, I keep asking my teammates to build but they just seam to forget about it after 3-4 rockets so we're not building fast enough (only place where they do remember to build is last -_-).

Yeah, there were a couple of moment like "should we push? are we pushing? guys, get heals, we're about to push. fuck it, I'm poping on roamer, get in line". Also, that one time we tried to block middle with just demo, yeah, we were too slow on that one. I also try to flash only when needed, and sometimes it works great (that one flash on the scout about to die so he could in turn take down theirs), and at times I make basic errors (again, no flash on demo jumping).

Thanks again for the review, I've passed it forward to rest of the team so hopefully they'll see theirs mistakes too.

Second one is for NJA
http://www.twitch.tv/bot_tay/b/332043629

I was told to be a bit louder, so hopefully I am.

Hope I covered what you were looking for! =3

I was thinking of something, and it came to my attention that if someone ends up reviewing one of these demos for a 6s player, they could stream it (assuming they do stream) so the knowledge passed to the one who needed the help isn't restricted only to one person.

You did! Thanks for the review :0. I'll try not to be the first to engage the combo on pushes now.

Are you trolling me right now? =o