Thanks for devoting some time to refining the map. Even if Valve doesn't let you update cp_metalworks, it would be nice to have an _rc8.
You might consider removing or blocking all the overhangs at Mid and in Valley. They often catch catch Soldiers that want to jump off the walls for bombs.
http://i.imgur.com/o24tNnP.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/ZWAgwpn.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/sPfSq4p.jpg
There's a solid lamp on both sides of Mid that protrudes past the clipbrush.
http://i.imgur.com/z8qQYkp.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/oj24kq2.jpg
I think the Last Point could have some props or other visual indicators that players can walk up either side of the ramp, especially since newer players will be exposed to Metalworks via MM.
http://i.imgur.com/MFG9rvh.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/8nZoCrf.jpg
Now, a couple personal gripes that I would like you to consider: the railings at Spawn are solid, which makes them annoying to shoot through.
http://i.imgur.com/Or7gfY3.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/feiVlN3.jpg
And finally, the pallets in Alley are not smooth, which makes it a challenge to slide up them. I'll try to post a video soon.
http://i.imgur.com/lO9injj.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/HQohnqg.jpg
Edit: made the video.
https://youtu.be/67VbbDzFzCU